Reflection

Looking back to my first blog posted and looking at my goal for this class. I notice from the blog posts what this class is asking for and I would never thought that this class would be asking for that. I believe it is trying to say (say, asking or telling what ever you like) for every writing you are doing what is the purpose for that to you or what message are you trying to get out. Yes, it is homework so you have to do it but still it is your thought, your message. However, in my first blog post i had said that English 101 course well help you with your paper for other classes. I can truly say it help me out i some of my major paper of my career course.

In this class I'm learning a lot it doesn't matter if you are learning by doing a paper or by blog post. I believe you can get "A" in this class but that doesn't mean that you learned everything in this course. You can take this class twice and you still wont we able to learn or remember everything that is covered in this course.

Difference Between Literacy Narrative and Ad Analysis

Purpose: The purpose for literacy narrative essay is a telling a story that will be grabs the reader's attention. Ad Analysis essay is analyzing and also describing about the advertisement. A narrative essay go through detail for hat is trying to say, but on the other hand ad analysis essay give you hidden messages explaining them.

Audience: The audience for literacy narrative essay for schools, students, professor,friends and family. The analysis essay is more for advertising or researchers to see how it grabs the attention of a customers. Most of the time ad analysis appear in a business report or research.

Tone: The narrative tone is happy and sad, it is like telling a story first is sad but the end is happy. However, the analysis tone is more like serious, it is just describing and explaining something.

Genre: The genre of narrative essay is more of a personal story, but the analysis is trying to explain to you.

Literacy narrative essay is telling a story based on their own experience in life, but Ad analysis essay describe a advertisement with a message that is most time hidden.

IPhone a Smart Way

Purpose: The purpose of this advertisement for IPhone applies to the buyers. The argument of this advertisement is making that you can talk to your friends or family's by look at their face on your phones is called "Face Chat." According to the picture you can look at the face of the person you talking as of a live feed back.

Audience: The audience of this advertisement is target the newer generation that is up and rising to new technology. Basically it is applying to anyone who has a phone or who is trying to buy a new IPhone. It is telling you that you don't need a computer to do a face talk buy using Skype, that you can do a face talk anywhere you want with you IPhone and that you don't need internet.

Genre: The Genre of this advertisement would be for new technology. This is similar to other advertisement about phone, that applies to people who like newer technology as also a smart phone. Apple company that make the IPhones always come with better technology that the customer would like. that is what i would expect from a big company like Apple trying to make their customer happy with newer technology.

Tone: The tone of this advertisement new technology or new Iphones. In this tone it tries to show the IPhone stand out from any other phones. this company brings out some better and better each year. There for, the Apple customer like what they see and that bring out the sale number for the IPhones.

An "A" paper or "C" paper

What makes A or C paper?

1. Clear and Focused - An "A" grade paper is focused, clear to understand, and specific to the topic. Good writer of his or her details for support to show what is important about the topic. The writer begins with an interesting idea, thought, or sometime with a quote that keeps the reader's attention. An "C" paper can be well organized but it doesn't keep focus and that well not keep the reader's attention.
2. Word Choice - An "A" paper will have an intense word when needed. Also writer uses precise, fresh original phrases and quotes. The write well use strong words that make the paper stand out. An "C" grade paper contains a lot of errors that uses word choices that are confusing also can loss the reader's attention and it is unclear.
3. Grammar Errors - An "A" paper has no or few errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. The writer has clear sentences for the reader's and a clear idea. An "C" paper well will be written not clear for understandable. The paper might have run on sentences, which will throw the reader's off with a confusing sentences.

I always have a problem with grammar errors and sometime with word choice. I believe i can keep focus on the main idea and have my paper understandable through out the paper.