Monday, October 24, 2011

Reflection

Looking back to my first blog posted and looking at my goal for this class. I notice from the blog posts what this class is asking for and I would never thought that this class would be asking for that. I believe it is trying to say (say, asking or telling what ever you like) for every writing you are doing what is the purpose for that to you or what message are you trying to get out. Yes, it is homework so you have to do it but still it is your thought, your message. However, in my first blog post i had said that English 101 course well help you with your paper for other classes. I can truly say it help me out i some of my major paper of my career course.

In this class I'm learning a lot it doesn't matter if you are learning by doing a paper or by blog post. I believe you can get "A" in this class but that doesn't mean that you learned everything in this course. You can take this class twice and you still wont we able to learn or remember everything that is covered in this course.

Sunday, October 23, 2011

Difference Between Literacy Narrative and Ad Analysis

Purpose: The purpose for literacy narrative essay is a telling a story that will be grabs the reader's attention. Ad Analysis essay is analyzing and also describing about the advertisement. A narrative essay go through detail for hat is trying to say, but on the other hand ad analysis essay give you hidden messages explaining them.

Audience: The audience for literacy narrative essay for schools, students, professor,friends and family. The analysis essay is more for advertising or researchers to see how it grabs the attention of a customers. Most of the time ad analysis appear in a business report or research.

Tone: The narrative tone is happy and sad, it is like telling a story first is sad but the end is happy. However, the analysis tone is more like serious, it is just describing and explaining something.

Genre: The genre of narrative essay is more of a personal story, but the analysis is trying to explain to you.

Literacy narrative essay is telling a story based on their own experience in life, but Ad analysis essay describe a advertisement with a message that is most time hidden.

IPhone a Smart Way


Purpose: The purpose of this advertisement for IPhone applies to the buyers. The argument of this advertisement is making that you can talk to your friends or family's by look at their face on your phones is called "Face Chat." According to the picture you can look at the face of the person you talking as of a live feed back.

Audience: The audience of this advertisement is target the newer generation that is up and rising to new technology. Basically it is applying to anyone who has a phone or who is trying to buy a new IPhone. It is telling you that you don't need a computer to do a face talk buy using Skype, that you can do a face talk anywhere you want with you IPhone and that you don't need internet.

Genre: The Genre of this advertisement would be for new technology. This is similar to other advertisement about phone, that applies to people who like newer technology as also a smart phone. Apple company that make the IPhones always come with better technology that the customer would like. that is what i would expect from a big company like Apple trying to make their customer happy with newer technology.

Tone: The tone of this advertisement new technology or new Iphones. In this tone it tries to show the IPhone stand out from any other phones. this company brings out some better and better each year. There for, the Apple customer like what they see and that bring out the sale number for the IPhones.

Saturday, October 22, 2011

An "A" paper or "C" paper

What makes A or C paper?
  1. Clear and Focused - An "A" grade paper is focused, clear to understand, and specific to the topic. Good writer of his or her details for support to show what is important about the topic. The writer begins with an interesting idea, thought, or sometime with a quote that keeps the reader's attention. An "C" paper can be well organized but it doesn't keep focus and that well not keep the reader's attention.
  2. Word Choice - An "A" paper will have an intense word when needed. Also writer uses precise, fresh original phrases and quotes. The write well use strong words that make the paper stand out. An "C" grade paper contains a lot of errors that uses word choices that are confusing also can loss the reader's attention and it is unclear.
  3. Grammar Errors - An "A" paper has no or few errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. The writer has clear sentences for the reader's and a clear idea. An "C" paper well will be written not clear for understandable. The paper might have run on sentences, which will throw the reader's off with a confusing sentences.
I always have a problem with grammar errors and sometime with word choice. I believe i can keep focus on the main idea and have my paper understandable through out the paper.

Tuesday, September 20, 2011

For My First Paper

1. One of the topics i would write about for my first essay would be a personal narrative paper.
  • My last paper for my English class at my high school senior year was a personal narrative paper. The personal narrative paper was one of my best writing that i had done, because when i was writing it i didn't want to stop writing; at a point in the middle of the paper i had a feeling that is was one of my best paper i have written. When i had showed it two of my teacher to get there point of view, they were impressed because that was one of my best writing they seen. The personal narrative paper can be good because your cant get the wrong materials or that you didn't get the right research because it is based on you life.
2. Another one of topic I would write a research paper.

  • Many students get worried or hate when they are told to do a research paper, and also i hate doing research paper. However, at my first year at northeastern taking JUST 101 i was told to do a research paper. And it was not a small research paper it was 8-10 page paper. On the other hand, when your attending course that you like and doing a 10 page paper doesn't sound that bad after all. I would say that was a good experience for me because, i never had done a 10 page research paper before. At first i was writing the same thing over and over, but then later on i found myself how i could talk about a lot of different ideas for that topic.
3. I have not thought of a third topic paper that i would like to write about. However, when i come across a topic that i would like to write about, i well make sure to post that topic.

Sunday, September 4, 2011

English 101

English 101 is a course that you have to take it in any college that you want to attend. This course is good can help you guide to wright some major papers for your career classes or just in normal classes. Because of all colleges want you to take English 101 course, and therefore i have to take the English 101 course class also at Northeastern Illinois University. However, I think English 101 is a great way to get started your first year of college; where it helps by starts you to remember some old wright methods and learn some new methods. There are a lot more methods in this course that you can learn and also are helpful. I want a lot from any of my college course classes that I have registrant for. But from this course I want to get all the help and guides to wright a great paper that I have to do all throughout college course. This is what I want from the English 101 course. However, each student want to learn all different types if ideas, methods, and how to use the materials. And now therefore if you are taking English 101 or planing to take what do you want to learn from the English 101 course.